Calling All EBAY Sellers!!, Need help Options

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Ok i attempted to write a description for my 360 that i will be selling on ebay. Can you lemme know whats good and whats bad, and maybe if i need to add more:

Xbox 360 Elite Bundle!

This Xbox 360 Elite is around Six months old, Used rarely and never played for more than 2 hours straight. Never watched movies on it.

Comes with:

2 controllers, 16 games including the rockband package, microsoft ethernet cable 10 ft, and a 24ft ethernet cable and all HD cables.

Games:

Juiced 2
Rockband (game,drums,guitar,mic)
Amped 3
Skate
Two Worlds
Fight Night Round 3
Smackdown vs Raw 2007
Smackdown vs Raw 2008
Call of Duty 4
Rainbow Six Vegas
Need for Speed Carbon
GUN
Profect gothem racing 3
Saints Row
NHL 2k8
Need for speed undergound 2 (original xbox game playable on elite)

All have books with case and game except for Rainbow Six Vegas


also, i ahve no clue how to set up shipping

all help and advice will be greatly appreciated