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post Nov 3, 2008 - 11:58 PM
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Do we have one?

I dunno, I like to write some poetry sometime..just wondering if anybody else enjoys doing the same.

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post Nov 5, 2008 - 2:27 PM
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I trace your face, that crimson line
Separating flesh, I hear you whine
You cry, you beg, I pay no mind
There is no free will because B****, you're mine!

I've kissed those lips, I now hold in my hand
I've caressed those arms, that now lay in the sand
I want every part of you, because I love you to death
Those cries, those pleas, those chokes and short breaths

Can't you see together we shall be?
Now you can't leave, this is eternity
No more fearing you running off and being a bad girl
You will stay here with me, and be a part of my world


(uuuggghhhh...... ok I guess I am done LOL I took a crack at it)

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- xs94st   Poetry thread?   Nov 3, 2008 - 11:58 PM
- - LewFX   I have about 20 poems in my collection   Nov 4, 2008 - 12:37 AM
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- - axelrduvirage   ^^ Nice!!! lots of passion, imagerie,...   Nov 5, 2008 - 4:48 AM
- - Random_Stranger   hhhmmm........ B**** O' B****, Eyes like a f...   Nov 5, 2008 - 4:50 AM
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|- - Random_Stranger   QUOTE (D-Man @ Nov 5, 2008 - 6...   Nov 5, 2008 - 2:02 PM
- - FreddyTheOthaMeat   my favorite poet doing my favorite poem http://ww...   Nov 5, 2008 - 10:36 AM
- - LewFX   POEM: Reality open your mind and be free, think o...   Nov 5, 2008 - 10:57 AM
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